Consider cutting down the length of the credits sequence, or intercutting it with images related to the narrative. Look again at you choice of font for the credits - does it relate to the genre? Fade the music at the end of the title sequence. Some fo the dialogue is quite quiet. You need to make it clearer in the opening sequence what the film is about - and try to end your sequence on a more dramatic note.
Consider cutting down the length of the credits sequence, or intercutting it with images related to the narrative. Look again at you choice of font for the credits - does it relate to the genre? Fade the music at the end of the title sequence. Some fo the dialogue is quite quiet. You need to make it clearer in the opening sequence what the film is about - and try to end your sequence on a more dramatic note.
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